This is our third rough cut for our music video. It has been nearly fully edited now and it is really starting to look like what we hoped it would look like. The editing is a lot better in this cut and the lip syncing is very good. We did use a transition; the into-television transition at 2:12. We are re filming our shots soon and they will be clearer and will make the narrative easier to follow. I think that the storyline is a lot clearer now because before the feedback was that some of the audience didn't understand the narrative and more of them said they did now. This rough cut is near completion, we just need to add in the re filmed shots/the missing shots and a few more transitions and that will be the final cut.
We have received some more feedback on our music video from target audience members, although this time it is for our rough cut 3, the positives and negatives of rough cut 3 are;
Positives:
- Lip Syncing is really good
- Visuals and music work really well
- Good variety of shots
- Nice effects on video
- Good match on action
- Song choice is really good
- Good transitions and cuts (especially tv one)
- Performance shots outside are great
- Nice colour effects on argument at the end
- Good zoom at start
- Good OTS
Negatives:
- Camera shaky sometimes
- TV should turn on
- Speed up the flashback at the end
- Some out of focus shots
- Needs to be finished
- Some shots a little too long
- Indoor shots aren't brilliant
- Some shots need to be added in
At the moment the positives are now outweighing the negatives which is good, we hope to correct the all of the negatives and have virtually no negative comments by the final cut.
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